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Friday 26 May 2017

Story organiser

LI: To write a narrative orientation.
LI: To use simple and compound sentences.
 I learned it by using Subject,object,verb those words helped me know what I was going to write about how I learned it was to keep on writing and to put everything in the right places.

Title
Baby bear
Orientation

Baby bear and Mummy bear were in the cavern. Mummy bear was wondering around in the cavern then they got out and went off to look for some food. They were walking around on the ice. And baby bear wonder off and did not know where he was. There was a hill and a lake. then as he started to move up to the hill Footsteps slowly creaked on every step that he took.

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