Scar house

Scar house

It all began in the woods far away where they was two girls whose names were Ava she was a little girl who was .6 years old they was another girl who’s name was Isabella she was the little girl's mum they lived in the woods far in the .Wild the house was old and the garden was not that clean at all at the back and at the .Front they could not clean it up by them self  the have family put they .Can’t come down where they lived because it is to far to drive to.

The problem is that they have to drive far to get staff for the house like some food.And they have to clean up the garden in the front and at the back and also is because the little girl emma gets scar of where they going .To be living and how she has to stay in a room by herself when she has to go to sleep.

The Events is that they live by they selfs and that they have to make sure the house is clean before the people come over and see the new house.

The Solution is that they clean up the house in time for the family for when they can come over for dinner then.The family comes over and helps to clean up the garden adds some new flowers to the garden and waters the planes they repaint the house to a new white colour and add some bark to the driveway and the girl felt happy to be in a nice house again.

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Who is in the story - Mum - Isabella - Daughter - Ava

What - what happens in this story is that Ava the little girl and scary and she doesn't want to move house and also she has to sleep by herself.

where - where this happens is the forest far away.

What I learned about was Scar house we had to write a story on a photo I did not make mine Scar because i did't want to do it that scary because it will go to scary and not make sentence I learned how to write a story and how I story works and how I learned it was by knowing what to do.