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Wednesday, 7 June 2017

Story organiser Solution



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Baby bear felt happy because mummy bear came to save him from in the lake. He felt so cold and freezing he had water on himself. It was like a  fluffy soft body put his body Was like water mummy bear was making. Baby bear warm from all that water and was making the water come off his cold. frozen body He was cold like ice and fluffy like clouds mummy bear saved him when she. Saw him drop into the water and mummy bear jumped like a kangaroo and splashed into the water she grabbed baby bear from under water and went on to the icy cold water and was helping him to breath. And then he got up and was helping mummy bear catch dinner and never went up the hill a again.  
LI: To write a narrative solution. LI: To use similes in our writing I learned how to write a Solution in a story we learned how to write a Solution in our story we had to write about baby bear and mummy bear we had to write about what happens to baby bear and what dose mummy bear do to help baby bear and what the Solution is How I learned it was by knowing what a Solution is and what Solution has in it.

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