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Title -The floating land

This story began in the clouds far away where there was a boy called James and his sister Sea.They lived with their granddad they lived in a big old house up above all the clouds.

Grandad built a rocket he built it from some old wood and some old glass that they had he learned how to build one then he got some paper and made up his own one . James said omg it was big enough for three people that would be enough space for all three of them.put the problem was that it didn't work at all and James was thinking of a good idea to fix it and see if it worked out in the air put then granddad said no because it still would notIt didn’t  work after all that hard work James said see about that if I get it fixed and done before next week. Can we fly it around granddad said deal.

Then James got on to work day after day he would fix it then it came to that day and they turned all the.Switches on the machine it started to make a loud noise then light flashed from the side and doors opened wide.

They went into the door that opened and got in they sets and flew off the floating land and granddad.Was flying the rocket granddad said how did you fix it with a little bite of help from sea we wanted to see you happy after all you were mad everyday so we thought this would make you happy.

Plan

Title - The floating land

Who - Girl called-Sea,Boy called -James,Grandad called -John.

Where - Up in the sky far away from land.

What - What is happening is that the boy takes off with the rocket.

How - How it happened was that James took the rocket.

Why - why he did it was because he wanted to feel like a superhero.

LI: To plan and write narratives quickly.

Today we learned how to write Ouick would teach us how to write Ouick we had to write a story about a floating land I talked about who was on the floating land and what they want to be they were to kids and they had a granddad who bulite a rocket what I liked was it takes time to write a story and what we learned was how to write and how I learned it was by taking by time.