Story organiser Problem

Problem

Baby bear decide to walk around on the ice as Mummy bear was cahting some fish for dinner then he saw this long icy staircase he thought that it was a bad idear. Put he still went up the long icy staircase the staircase was really spiller and was really hard to walk on. As he was walking on the icy staircase he nearly spilled put he did not then he was at the top of the hill and as he walked up to look at the edge. The ice started to crack then when it cracked baby bear fill in to the lake and saw mummy bear when he was in the water.

LI: To write a narrative problem and solution. LI: To use I learned how to Story organiser and how to write a problem and we were writing about a baby bear and a mummy bear How I learned it was by knowing what is in a problem and what a problem.